July 21, 2005

+ IMMORTAL LOVE +

The terrace doors opened and a warm mist filled the room, and he was there.I wasn't sure if i was still dreaming. His aura was overwhelming, drawing me in...the power so thick i could hardly breathe. I left the bed and went to him as if hypnotized, and entered the magical circle surrounding him. My wispy nightgown seemed to fall off me as his eyes flickering like flames gazed slowly at my naked body. I closed my eyes feeling as if i was drowning in the heavy air of seductive power. I felt him kissing my eyes open and he was also naked, his body outlined in a glow, his scent so provocative, his eyes with the firey glow made words unnecessary. He lifted me like i was air as he danced slowly to mystical music from nowhere, but so familiar from long ago. Fleeting thoughts ran thru me...thoughts of rememberances from a past life with this love...i knew it was him from centuries ago, from his clothes and the large onyx ring i had lovingly placed on his finger. He carried me to the bed and knelt over me...the charisma making me weak. His touch like tantalizing strokes of magic. I reached up and removed the band holding his hair as it fell over his shoulders in loose thick curls..not resisting running my fingers thru it, smelling it, wanting to get lost in it. The power ran between us, back and forth, liquid,burning,growing...closer than flesh could touch, closer than hearts could beat. Kissing my neck, trailing sparks of delight, biting my nipples into erective submissiveness. My hands in his luscious thick hair pushing him down...his moaning sounds of pleasure at the taste of me, his wet lips sucking, his tongue entering, exploring as if i was his last feast...licking and sucking until i was throbbing at his flicking tongue...the waves of passion flowing thru me, pushing against his face until the height of ultimate ecstacy was reached...pulling him up to kiss and suck my exotic spice from his tongue. Clinging and writhing against each other, laying him under me submissive to his own desire. Passion growing again at the mere touch of my tongue on his skin...sucking his nipples, swirling circles around them as he moves against me...moving down, his scent divine, making me dizzy with desire, wrapping his legs around me while i take him in my mouth sucking slowly up and down, while circling the tip, sucking harder and faster while he pushes in and out...feeling him throbbing almost to the ultimate climax. Moving up, we look at each other..just looking, feeling unbelieveably melted together. Slowly riding him as he traces my lips with his fingers,running them down to embrace by breasts...holding my hips rocking me against him faster and harder as the lust grows into screams of pleasure while he continues the rhythm until the passion mounts again as he explodes his warm wet juices into me..slowly now until we both lay wrapped together in ultimate satisfaction. As the sun comes up i awaken...alone, wondering if it was real or a dream. Crying in my pillow i open my eyes and see a tendril of his luscious thick hair, wet from my tears. Yes my love, you are with me in life, death, afterlife...always.

25 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

I really liked that story mafia ,shows a very mature style of writing and also show your naughty side .Well done keep up the great stories you have great potential as a writer ...

July 22, 2005  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

yes mafia is doing a good job she brings me lots of money 'drips'

July 23, 2005  
Blogger Talîy`ah Templar said...

It's an interesting story... it implicitly illustrates some really good points.

Girls like guys who take the lead and show "gentle authority." Not push-overs mind you. Just someone with enough "confidence" to take her by the hand and show her the doorway to fulfillment of her own desires.

Coming to think of it, no wonder guys who are OVERTLY nice just never score. They are so "nice" they pass on their authority to the girl. No wonder the usual pattern they go through is: get lucky... go on the date... spend shitloads of hard-earned ca$h to BUY her affection... be overtly NICE... and end it all with a curious dry feeling between their legs.

Honestly, i think guys in general should learn to evict the "inner wussy" as my friend David D'Angelo says, and learn to act like MEN. Can't blame them though... it's how society has DE-EVOLVED unfortunately.

Beyond that, good, well-written story.

July 25, 2005  
Blogger mafia_bride said...

Well there is nothing wrong with the lady spending her hard earned cash on a date either. Men that are overtly nice and don't score should change their mindframe, it shouldnt be about scoring anyway. If their game is to be overtly nice to score then they are in it for ulterior motives lol...some men are like that, but a real man can be honest with himself and the lady. I honestly don't think any lady wants to have all the authority...thats just too easy and boring.

July 25, 2005  
Blogger Talîy`ah Templar said...

Yes, that's the thing. And unfortunatley most men give ALL the authority through that "inner wussy" that tells them to be so darned... UNNATURALLY nice, haha. We're simply not hard-wired to create "attraction" that way and yet modern society seems to have conditioned us to be that way unfortunately. Sure, there is nothing wrong with women spending on the date, and that's why most guys just don't get it. You can't BUY a woman's affection, and you can't pay your way to her bed (unless she's turned on by "sugar-daddies"). Anyways, some things in your story just point out that most men need a lot of DE-wussifying to do :)

July 25, 2005  
Blogger mafia_bride said...

on the other hand though i dont think the "opposites attract" thing works well...neither does the "i need to only match with someone of equal rank"..that might sound contradictory...i think we like to see a little of ourselves in a mate it seems to be human nature, but also want a little edge to it, a little of the opposite. BTW i love ur term "de wussified" lol...that term makes for a mental image of a puppy at his masters heels wimpering love me oh plz love me lolol i'll be ur wimp but ohh plz love me lol

July 26, 2005  
Blogger Talîy`ah Templar said...

You've seen some of Chris Rock's stand-ups huh? Haha, remember the part where he was explaining what men ACTUALLY mean when they come up with niceties?

'"Honey would you like a drink" is actually saying "Honey would you like some DICK?"' <-- haha.

Ofcourse, opposites have their place... mainly when it comes to arguments :) But when it comes to *attraction* proper, ultimately it's the man who is MEANT to take the lead... in a spirit of honesty and FUN. i guess it's safe to say it's how we're biologically meant to function as couplets. Just like other species in the animal kingdom. In order to boink, you gotta make her bleep, haha. OK i'll stop.

July 26, 2005  
Blogger mafia_bride said...

Wallyyyyyy....ohhh fruck! you kill me....how can i even be serious now ohhh lordie that pic...sorry Arman i lost my train of thought, i'll try later **giggles at Wallys pants..oh shit, i can't look**

July 26, 2005  
Blogger Talîy`ah Templar said...

To think that Fiona would eventually end up looking like that... hahaha (i hope she doesn't read Mafia's blog, haha).

July 28, 2005  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

mafia! your a notty gurl!

July 29, 2005  
Blogger mafia_bride said...

Wick...LOL I had my Skippy jammies on when I wrote that story, so that makes it not "notty" la laa skippyyy, skippyyyy *kiss,kiss*

July 30, 2005  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I'm just happy and damn randy.

July 31, 2005  
Blogger mafia_bride said...

Skippy the typing Roo...LOOOOOL its sooo cute (wonders if Skippy keeps chat/blog time snackys in his pouch)

August 01, 2005  
Blogger Future is now said...

Skippy is not gay but his boyfriend is lmao.Nice poem btw mafia as always. You really should make a book and post it you have talent.I might do the same some day.

August 06, 2005  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

You all know skippy is road kill right?You know he hops no more along the highway searching for fun and happiness.I am sorry but someone has to burst your skippy bubble ppl may as well be me seems I am such a bitch lol

August 06, 2005  
Blogger yee wei said...

nice post!more great stuffs in my blog!! check out my TWIART.pls leave me comment.thank you.

August 06, 2005  
Blogger Future is now said...

Oh great i see we have blog spam now.How do they find our sites anyways?

August 07, 2005  
Blogger mafia_bride said...

Blog spam LOL if they clicked on "next blog" button they might have found this blog..that would mean their blogs r before this one. But u can't click to go to previous blogs, just the next blog. There were too many that were just advertisement blogs..ohh I'm rambling on LOL.

August 07, 2005  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

We're just carign sharing ppl we even allow others to advertise on our blogs lol
it was inevatable that everntually ppl we didn't know would find out blogs but that's what it's all about right ?Or were we meant to keep them all secret lol see nowI am babbling mafia so nobody will notice you doing it lol.
Why is love so complicated why fo you get to the point where you get frustrated and can't express the way you feel without coming across as a bitch ???

August 08, 2005  
Blogger mafia_bride said...

ohhh Pammy u can never be a bitch. Maybe the person on the other side (the person who is the receiver of ur expression) has put up a defense, so that whatever u express is somehow distorted by them not by u, since they have a blockage of some kind in their level of receiving...does that make any sense?

August 08, 2005  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I can come across as a bitch even though i try not to ,and it's hard to actually open and tell someone how you feel when you've been screwed over too many times and the insecurities always come out it sucks I shouldn't feel this way but i do and it's hard to explain to the person

August 09, 2005  
Blogger mafia_bride said...

Isn't it possible that the person who screwed u over is really the one with the insecurities. Maybe re-evaluate your self worth, and maybe that old baggage from others will turn into positive motivation. I know it's not that easy to do and it takes time and energy to stay focused away from the past.

August 09, 2005  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

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August 23, 2005  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Is it wrong to jerk off to a blog? by the way don't ask me how i got here cause i was reading a blog and did some crazy shit and ended up here 22 blogs later.

September 11, 2005  
Blogger mafia_bride said...

ohhhhhh alex i guess it depends which way you're facing (aiming) LMAO might require windex & paper towels

September 24, 2005  

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